What Makes a Landing Page Convert? Lessons from Alex Hormozi, Berlin Balance & My First Clients

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Magda Sokol
May 30, 2025
7 min read

Let’s be honest: most landing pages are built to look good - not to convert.

You know the kind. Big hero image, vague “solutions,” one too many buzzwords. But when it comes to actually getting someone to book a call or download a lead magnet, the page flops.

If you’re a small business owner, especially in wellness or a female-led venture, your landing page can’t just look good. It needs to work.

So, how do you build one that does?

Here’s what I’ve learned from building my own (for Berlin Balance), studying Alex Hormozi’s legendary “$100M Offers” approach to landing pages, and designing for other small businesses in Webflow.

1. Clarity Beats Cleverness

Let’s start with Hormozi’s mantra: “Clear > Clever.”

You have about 3 seconds to answer one question for your visitor:

“What do I get if I keep reading?”

On the Berlin Balance landing page, I didn’t lead with “mindful movement experiences” or “holistic corporate wellness.” I wrote:

Back Pain, Burnout, Bad Posture? Yoga Therapy Helps—And Your Company Can Offer It.

Direct. Visual. No buzzwords. That’s what hooks.

2. Pain First, Then Promise

As Lara Acosta teaches in her psychology-led marketing framework: people take action to avoid pain more often than to chase pleasure.

I leaned into this by calling out the problems that most office workers already know they have: neck tension, burnout, poor posture.

Then I promised a real-life solution: weekly yoga therapy. No apps. No fluff.

If your landing page skips the pain and jumps straight to your shiny offer, it’s missing what makes people lean in.

3. Build Like a Conversation, Not a Brochure

Hormozi says a landing page should mirror a real conversation you’d have with a potential client. That means answering objections before someone has to scroll back up.\

For Berlin Balance, I structured it like this:

  • The hook (pain + promise)
  • Benefits (why it works at work)
  • Definition (what is yoga therapy?)
  • Process (what happens next?)
  • FAQs (what if it’s not the right fit?)

And here’s a trick: I wrote each section like I were talking, not selling. Less “discover our unique methodology” and more “here’s how it works in 3 simple steps.”

4. Social Proof (Even If You Don’t Have Any Yet)

One thing missing from my launch: testimonials.

That’s changing soon, but if you’re in the same boat, here’s how to handle it:

  • Mention your experience, network, or method. (e.g., “8 years in Berlin’s wellness scene.”)
  • Preview client outcomes (before/after scenarios).
  • Use transparent CTAs like “First session is free—no strings.”

Transparency builds trust.

5. Give Something Away (Strategically)

Lead magnets aren’t optional. They’re how you turn a visitor into a subscriber—and eventually into a client.

Mine? A free Personal Website Checklist, especially for small business owners and solo founders. It helps people spot what’s not working on their current site.

Yours should solve a specific problem and be easy to consume (PDF, checklist, mini-audio, whatever fits your flow).

6. SEO Is UX

If you build in Webflow, you’ve already got SEO basics on your side: clean code, alt text, and manual control over meta titles.

But don’t forget this: SEO starts with content clarity.

  • Use real, specific language (no “solutions” or “synergy”).
  • Add internal links to related blog posts or services.
  • Write your meta title and description like ad copy (and don’t stuff keywords).

Final Thoughts (And a Soft CTA)

If you’re a small business (specially one led by women or focused on wellness), your website shouldn’t be just a digital business card. It should be a working sales tool.

Want help building a page that actually converts?

Let’s talk. I’m currently booking free discovery calls via She Develops. I design in Webflow, build with strategy, and optimize for search—and humans.

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A portrait of Magda lying down in a camper van's bed reading her e-book
Magda Sokol
May 30, 2025
7 min read